A/N: Thanks so much for
all your reviews...I’m trying to get this out before I fall asleep over my
computer, else I’d thank you all individually(which I still hope to do soon).
The new plan is to try and get a chapter of SOMETHING out every week.
The second reason I'm posting this is cos' I ran
across an excerpt from a Ranma story that I really, really want to
read!! If anyone knows what the name of this story is, who wrote it, or where I
can find it, I'll willingly write you two chapters ASAP of any one of my
stories you want updated!!! (As you can see, it's driving me crazy!)
Excerpt:
Ranma danced with Akane, leading her slowly down the
hall toward her doom. Around them, other couples flashed by in a whirl of
bright coloured silks and gay laughter. The haunting music played on, and Akane
was caught in his eyes.
"So you want me to save you?" he asked,
amusement brightening his grey eyes, his gaze trained on her face as he whirled
her past the musicians. Akane could hardly bear the unholy delight she saw in
his face. She averted her glance and mentally sifted through her choices again.
There were too few- only two, actually. She could either watch as her soul
faded away in a matter of days, or she could sell it to the highest bidder, and
when she died, the demons would pull her to hell....or she could pay Ranma's
price and keep her soul, what there was of it. And still she might have chosen
hell, if she didn't need her soul to make the next transaction. Angels didn't
deal with the soulless. It was her passport of entry. Even if she could retain
her soul for a temporary period, it would be enough. But Balial wouldn't wait.
"Dearest lady Akane," Ranma mocked,
"Your silence is most becoming, but really...inappropriate. Listen, wench!
If you want to be saved, you've to decide now. In a few days, it will be
impossible, even for one such as me. Whether I win or not, you'll lose."
Akane considered. The Eternal Champion...the knight
destined to defend....yet what previous champions had done for free, now the Saotome
clan charged for. Of course, it had brought them riches.
Lord Saotome, Knight of the Black, made his eyes
unreadable. Even in this realm, what went around came around back to you, if
you were patient. Akane had slipped through his hands once but she was so very
near again, nothing could spoil it. She'd willingly give herself into his
hands, and she would never be free again. He squelched a smile at the thought.
END Excerpt
So, if you know the story, don’t leave me
in suspense! :)
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Chapter 8. Fishing for Details
Akane half-rose, startled. The young woman eyeing her
suspiciously was entering through the small cottage door. Invisible in the seat
across from Akane, Ranma folded his unseen legs and scowled at this new
complication.
“This is Akane, Nabiki.” Kasumi’s voice floated out of
the tiny kitchen behind her. “She’s our guest.”
Nabiki pulled off her slippers and eyed Akane
inquisitively. “Akane, like the princess?”
Kasumi came out of the kitchen, wiping her hands dry
on a dishcloth. “You know how many Akanes there are in the kingdom after the
princess was born!” she said cheerfully.
She motioned towards Nabiki. “Akane, this is my younger
sister, Nabiki.”
“Great!” Ranma said, hitting his forehead with the
heel of his palm. “Someone else to worry about! Watch it, Akane, this one looks
sharper than the other one.”
Akane smiled nervously. It wouldn’t do for either of
the sisters to know that she really was the princess. If it had been three days
ago, Akane would have immediately spilled her story and demanded that they take
her up to the castle, but circumstances had changed. She no longer blindly
trusted everyone she came across. Kasumi seemed very nice, but Nabiki was
watching her with speculation.
“Have we...met?” Nabiki asked. “You look...familiar.”
Panicked, Akane fought not to look at Ranma. She did
travel the kingdom once a year, to be seen by her subjects, but she was usually
so covered up and the glimpses of her were so brief, it was impossible for any
citizen to have a very good idea of what she looked like.
“I doubt it,” she said. “But it is...nice...to meet
you.”
“Bow to her, fool!” Invisible Ranma hissed at her.
“No, don’t LOOK at me, just do it! Princesses don’t bow, it’ll throw that one
off her guard.”
Akane hurriedly bowed to Kasumi and Nabiki. “I’m very
grateful to your sister for allowing me to rest here.”
“Oh, no! I’m the grateful one!” Kasumi fluttered her
hands. She turned to Nabiki. “Can you imagine? I let Ayako out of my sight for
a moment. Before I knew it, she was wading out to sea...”
“Ayako?” Nabiki interrupted sharply. “Where is she?”
Her worry for her niece drew her attention away from Akane.
“Thanks to Akane...” Kasumi resumed, but was
interrupted yet again by her tiny daughter, who ran out, yelling with glee to
see her aunt, and was scooped up into the arms of a relieved Nabiki.
“Silly darling, what did you do now?” Nabiki demanded
of her. But Ayako spotted Akane, and shoved her way out of Nabiki’s grasp to
somehow squirm her way into Akane’s arms. There she gurgled, and batted Akane’s
cheek happily.
Nabiki visibly relaxed when she saw her niece
accepting the stranger, Akane saw. Obviously, the wary girl had a very soft
spot for her niece.
“Well, dinner’s almost ready. Shall we eat?” Kasumi
smiled cheerfully. She ushered Akane and Nabiki in to the tiny kitchen, with
her unknown, invisible guest following close behind. Akane nearly groaned at the
smell of fresh fish stew and warm bread that invaded and tantalized her nose.
Ranma groaned aloud. He was starving. He hadn’t eaten since he went invisible,
because it was impossible. His fingers simply went through everything.He
wondered how he could filch some stew.
Kasumi seated Akane first, then she and Nabiki
followed suit. She served Akane some stew and bread in a bowl first, as well as
a huge mug of cider. Ayako she seated in her lap, and carefully fed her bits
out of her own bowl.
Akane listened with one ear as Kasumi recounted the
story of how she’d saved Ayako. She was distracted by Ranma’s attempts to steal
food from the cooking cauldron still on the stove, and his curses when he
failed. Served him right to suffer a little for a change.
She took a spoonful of the stew and found it to be
rich and delicious. The cider was tart, cold and tasty.
“So what were you doing out on the beach?” Nabiki
asked Akane, bringing her attention back to the table.
“Er...I was...well, actually, I’m...meeting my cousin
at the palace tomorrow,” Akane lied desperately. “Er...she works there.”
“Oh, my! Really?” Kasumi exclaimed. “Why, I work at
the palace as well. I’m a maid there, you see. What is your cousin’s name?”
Akane was flabbergasted. How in the world could she have
such bad luck as to run into the one person arund here who worked at the
palace? She racked her brain for any names, and finally remembered her
lady-in-waiting.
“Ukyou,” she said. “Ukyou...er...looks after some of
the royal family, I believe, and she said she may be getting a few days off
soon.”
“Ukyou Kuonji?” Kasumi sounded startled. “Why, she’s
Princess Akane’s attendant! I only know that because my friend Miko cleans her
room. She says Ukyou is out at all times of the night and day, attending to Princess’
Akane’s every demand!”
Ranma laughed, though only Akane heard him.
“Every demand...?!” Akane sputtered. Since when was
she such a demanding person? “And do you know the princess so well?”
“Of course not,” Kasumi demurred. “I haven’t been
working there all that long, and the wing I clean is far away from the
princess’ chambers....but, you hear stories.”
“What...what kind of stories?” Akane asked, unable to
help herself. Gossip about herself was irresistible.
“Well, there’s the story that the princess is so
hideous that she’s always hidden away. You have to admit no one REALLY knows
what she looks like,” Nabiki drawled.
“What?” Akane was truly shocked. Ranma was laughing
harder. She scowled at him. He winked at her.
“But that’s just exaggeration,” Kasumi said. “Lots of
people have seen the princess. One of these days, I hope I might. I did hear
that she’s been spending more time in the gardens, though. Some of the maids
say they’ve seen her practicing some kind of magical martial arts she picked up
on her trip.”
Shampoo.
Both Ranma and Akane paused when they realized the
imposter was alive and well in the palace, Ranma with relief, Akane with fury.
“Anyway, I’m leaving for work early in the morning.
You can travel with me, if you like,” Kasumi generously offered, then rose to
clear the bowls.
“You should offer to help wash the dishes,” Ranma
said. “We don’t want them to suspect anything. Man, couldn’t you have used a
different name?”
Biting her lip to avoid snipping at Ranma and earning
strange looks from the sisters, Akane did as Ranma suggested. But she was quite
relieved when Nabiki, standing at the stone sink rinsing the bowls, refused her
offer to help wash dishes, as she honestly had no idea of how to accomplish
such a task.
Instead, Ayako climbed into her lap, and began to play
with the lace on her collar.
Later, the three of them went to sit outside the
cottage to watch the sunset, huge mugs of hot cocoa in their hands to warm
them.
“It’s so beautiful!” Akane exclaimed, unable to
believe the riot of colours washing across the horizon as the sun began to
sink.
“Yeah, we like the view,” Nabiki said complacently.
For a few minutes they sipped their drinks and watched
the show, their silence punctuated with the soothing sound of waves.
Inside the cottage, Ranma was concentrating with all
his will.“C’mon c’mon C’MON! It can’t be this hard to turn visible.” He stood
in front of the stove, inhaling the lovely odours. “I don’t want to starve.
C’mon, concentrate!” He breathed the odour of the stew deep into his lungs,
setting his mouth salivating.
“How long have you been here?”Akane asked, taking
another sip of her cocoa.
“Since our parents passed away,” Kasumi said. “We
lived...elsewhere when they were alive. When they died, our great-uncle, a
fisherman, brought us to live here. He passed on over two years ago.”
“I’m sorry,”Akane said sincerely.
“It’s all that sorcerer’s fault!” Nabiki’s voice was
filled with hatred.
Inside the cottage, Ranma filled his mind with hunger,
and then...
Pop!
He was visible again, he knew it! He grabbed the
wooden spoon in the cauldron, and wanted to jump for joy when his fingers
curled firmly around it.
He was about the brig the spoon to his mouth when he
heard Akane.
“Sorcerer?” she squeaked.
What was she talking about? Spoon forgotten, Ranma
moved closer to the entrance.
“Yes,” Nabiki said. “He came to our house. He was
looking for a baby with ‘the gift’, he said. Mother was pregnant with her third
child. He wanted the baby. We were poor by then, but we would never have sunk
so low. Father threw him out.”
“Father grew ill after that,” Kasumi said sadly. “And
then, after he...was gone, Mother lost the baby. The midwife came out saying
that the baby was stillborn. And Mother couldn’t take the disappointment.”
“How awful,” Akane murmured, her mind stuck on the one
word-sorcerer.
Inside, Ranma, too, had gone still. Not a muscle
moved. Slowly, he shook his head. It couldn’t be. Were they talking about
Kulloden? How many sorcerers were there?
“What did he look like?”Akane asked.
“Had a face like a knife,” Nabiki ground out.
“Long black hair,” Kasumi added.
Ranma nodded. Yup, it was him all right. That
meant...that this family had had their child stolen away by Kulloden.
That meant either he or Shampoo could be the lost
sibling.
“Was the third baby a boy or a girl?” Akane asked.
Ranma almost felt like hugging her then, but his spirits didn’t stay high.
“We don’t know,” Kasumi asked. “We were too young to
ask that.”
Akane turned shocked eyes towards the doorway, and
wondered if Ranma was listening to all this.
“We didn’t mean to bring up such grim topics tonight,”
Kasumi said with a laugh. “Nabiki, please tell us a story to make us smile.”
Akane listened, and laughed when Nabiki narrated the
story of Nala and how he had outwitted a demon. Meanwhile, Ranma ladled stew
into a bowl and thoughtfully chewed some bread, his mind turning over the
things he had heard.
He washed the bowl as silently as possible and
replaced it with the others. He looked around quietly. Akane’s bedding had
already been laid out in the loft of the cottage. Quickly, he climbed up the
stairs and hid himself in the quilts.
The night grew cooler, and Ayako drooled on Akane’s
shoulder, happily asleep. Kasumi and Nabiki rose, and collected the empty mugs,
ushering Akane inside. Entering the kitchen, Akane looked around for Ranma, but
there was no sign of him.
For a brief moment, she entertained the idea that
maybe he had left. The thought panicked her, and that in turn infuriated her.
Just because he was the only familiar face around didn’t mean she WANTED him
around!
Perhaps he had slipped out and gone for a walk.
“As I said earlier, Akane, your bedding is up in the
loft,” Nabiki reminded her. Akane immediately yawned at the thought of warm
bedclothes. Laughing, Kasumi took Ayako from her, and shooed her up the wooden
ladder.
“Good night, and than you very much,” Akane said,
looking down at them as she climbed. She reached the top of the ladder and
scrambled across the low wooden crawlspace. Tired and content, she didn’t
notice the unfamiliar shape in her bed.
Until a large, male hand came up to cover her mouth,
making her scream.
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